The only thing that I dislike here is the virgin MC vs the ML with a whole lot of experience trope. Bro is 30 yo ffs him having experience doesn’t make him less in love and doesn’t take anything from the story. I hate this trope with my whole being, most of the time they use the excuse that the MC is young at least compared to the ML (or just fboy ML lol he is so crazy omg) but here it’s not even that. Even if they do a whole reveal of the ML not having experience as well, which I doubt, this still would hit as unrealistic. Why can’t they both have experience, one more than the other sure but not Marie Sue and a whole Succubus for once (and I don’t like it that much even when the roles are reversed). Really love this story apart from that.
The only thing that I dislike here is the virgin MC vs the ML with a whole lot of experience trope. Bro is 30 yo ffs him having experience doesn’t make him less in love and doesn’t take anything from the story. I hate this trope with my whole being, most of the time they use the excuse that the MC is young at least compared to the ML (or just fboy ML lol he is so crazy omg) but here it’s not even that. Even if they do a whole reveal of the ML not having experience as well, which I doubt, this still would hit as unrealistic. Why can’t they both have experience, one more than the other sure but not Marie Sue and a whole Succubus for once (and I don’t like it that much even when the roles are reversed). Really love this story apart from that.