I really wish there was more chapters about how their marriage goes. They are so sweet. Like they said literal soulmates. But I have few complains..... spoiler
. . . . I wish his famous ex arch did not happen or was not as long as this one. I think as writers tried to portray FL as "emotionally strong, masculine, male like" they ignored that she can have negative feelings as well when their ex comes and tries to steal her boyfriend on "national tv", flirting every episode, getting news about their relationship etc. She was very okay with how things are going on , and always seemed extremely relaxed which is a bit absurd to be honest. Being masculine woman doesn't mean she can act everything as unimportant matter. I dont know if I expressed myself clearly but overall I dont rhink her reactions to particularly that arch was too nonchalant.
And about the other criticism, this is more about personal preference but I was really expecting ml to step up at least during proposal. Like she steps up in every important moments but he is a bit more in the backgrounds in that matters. I think it again comes to gender norms and how this webtoon swipes them "as a whole". Like they strictly stick into what is mans roles and women's and just swipe them. I think rather than that bluring lines would suit the manga more. It feels a bit over top when everything's is there but feels too unnatural.
And lastly , i wish the Fl's girlfriend, which we liked throughout the journey could get a boyfriend or pave the way she takes. Throughout the story we saw her freeing herself from her "loveless marriage" ideology and how she shaped her new way of life. Wanted to see if she find someone or if she choose different path in life.
Despite everything I criticized it is still one of the unique shoujus I have read so 5 starss
I really wish there was more chapters about how their marriage goes. They are so sweet. Like they said literal soulmates. But I have few complains..... spoiler
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I wish his famous ex arch did not happen or was not as long as this one. I think as writers tried to portray FL as "emotionally strong, masculine, male like" they ignored that she can have negative feelings as well when their ex comes and tries to steal her boyfriend on "national tv", flirting every episode, getting news about their relationship etc. She was very okay with how things are going on , and always seemed extremely relaxed which is a bit absurd to be honest. Being masculine woman doesn't mean she can act everything as unimportant matter. I dont know if I expressed myself clearly but overall I dont rhink her reactions to particularly that arch was too nonchalant.
And about the other criticism, this is more about personal preference but I was really expecting ml to step up at least during proposal. Like she steps up in every important moments but he is a bit more in the backgrounds in that matters. I think it again comes to gender norms and how this webtoon swipes them "as a whole". Like they strictly stick into what is mans roles and women's and just swipe them. I think rather than that bluring lines would suit the manga more. It feels a bit over top when everything's is there but feels too unnatural.
And lastly , i wish the Fl's girlfriend, which we liked throughout the journey could get a boyfriend or pave the way she takes. Throughout the story we saw her freeing herself from her "loveless marriage" ideology and how she shaped her new way of life. Wanted to see if she find someone or if she choose different path in life.
Despite everything I criticized it is still one of the unique shoujus I have read so 5 starss