Wow, what a beautiful piece. I mean this story was wonderful. Written in a lovely way. Even the side stories were amazing. I can’t say that I have read any other Yaoi written so nicely. I saw some people say that they wish Lyle had made Ash suffer a bit, but I think the way he went about it was spot on with his character. I do agree with another comment that mentioned that Lyle may be on the spectrum. Even so, the way he is written is so good though. Definitely a 10/10. And I don’t give that rating lightly or often. I also wanted to touch on how the side stories added even more depth to the couple after the end of the main story. It’s a great “Afterward.”
Wow, what a beautiful piece. I mean this story was wonderful. Written in a lovely way. Even the side stories were amazing. I can’t say that I have read any other Yaoi written so nicely. I saw some people say that they wish Lyle had made Ash suffer a bit, but I think the way he went about it was spot on with his character. I do agree with another comment that mentioned that Lyle may be on the spectrum. Even so, the way he is written is so good though. Definitely a 10/10. And I don’t give that rating lightly or often. I also wanted to touch on how the side stories added even more depth to the couple after the end of the main story. It’s a great “Afterward.”