This story had so much potential with both the characters and the plot. It felt rushed towards the middle to the end. Like this story didn’t need the kidnapping, graping, and confinement part, it could’ve been scrapped. Like WHY did Felix easily forgive Uriel, even after his kidnapping. And there’s the thing with Brandon and the other mermaid (forgot his name) like this story could’ve been written with them more in mind tbh. So much potential this story had
This story had so much potential with both the characters and the plot. It felt rushed towards the middle to the end. Like this story didn’t need the kidnapping, graping, and confinement part, it could’ve been scrapped. Like WHY did Felix easily forgive Uriel, even after his kidnapping. And there’s the thing with Brandon and the other mermaid (forgot his name) like this story could’ve been written with them more in mind tbh. So much potential this story had