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story was ruined and rushed

Demon King of Salvation August 8, 2026 9:27 pm

the beginning was litterally so good up until maybe like 70 chapters in until they ruined everything i feel like once she took Astair's eye and the time skip happened, all the character from astair was gone, especially his relationship with Ritaus or how he liked Kyla bc she could understand him. I'm also mad that it litterally says that Kyla forgets about her brother at the end, or that she hadn't thought of him since the time visiting him like ??? he was her motivation for the entire beginning of the story, and how Franz was also pushed off to the side post time-skip. The ending seriously made me mad because it took all the interesting part of the stories, ruined them, and skipped over so many details.

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