this was going so good for the first 40 ish chapters. the bond between the jack and mag? amazing. chemistry? amazing. then we get to the middle of the series and everyone just starts acting weird?? like they don’t have a brain? mag can’t make up her mind on whether or not she wants to continue her life as margaret or start a new life as mag. then when she follows jack up north just because everyone told her to, even though she had no plans to do so originally?? then on top of this she follows jack because she has feelings for him but then treats him like an asshole when he specifically told her that he had his on goals that he’s focusing on?? then completely acting like a dumbass and revealing her identity to everyone, then backtracking and saying she was a friend, THEN AGAIN about to reveal her identity to her parents, just to reaffirm the lie that their daughter burnt down the forest? i had to stop reading after that. we genuinely lost the plot. what’s even going on? mag was supposedly going to be on her healing era by staying in the south, and she improved the lives of many down there, but she isn’t strategic at all! how you got your own man telling you “good thing she isn’t so bright…" LOCK TF IN?? a shame because the chemistry between them was chef’s kiss.
also mentioned in the comments below but the character design was very inconsistent.. was i the only one who thought jack had red hair at first?(⊙…⊙ )
this was going so good for the first 40 ish chapters. the bond between the jack and mag? amazing. chemistry? amazing. then we get to the middle of the series and everyone just starts acting weird?? like they don’t have a brain? mag can’t make up her mind on whether or not she wants to continue her life as margaret or start a new life as mag. then when she follows jack up north just because everyone told her to, even though she had no plans to do so originally?? then on top of this she follows jack because she has feelings for him but then treats him like an asshole when he specifically told her that he had his on goals that he’s focusing on?? then completely acting like a dumbass and revealing her identity to everyone, then backtracking and saying she was a friend, THEN AGAIN about to reveal her identity to her parents, just to reaffirm the lie that their daughter burnt down the forest? i had to stop reading after that. we genuinely lost the plot. what’s even going on? mag was supposedly going to be on her healing era by staying in the south, and she improved the lives of many down there, but she isn’t strategic at all! how you got your own man telling you “good thing she isn’t so bright…" LOCK TF IN?? a shame because the chemistry between them was chef’s kiss.
also mentioned in the comments below but the character design was very inconsistent.. was i the only one who thought jack had red hair at first?(⊙…⊙ )