I don't like reading incest stuff with very few exceptions, and you might think the fact that they arent blood brothers is good, but I feel like it kind of is an excuse to make it "not as bad" as true incest. Imo, if it really was incest and Ilodel was a genuine Rockfurt who was born a beta, it would be more interesting. It feels kinda hand-wavy for them to be like "we arent REALLY" brothers.I think this story works best when its more disgusting, ikwim. I want mc to throw up out of sheer disgust and horror at what is happening to him. When you read something like this, it should feel like a gut punch. It should feel as wrong as possible.
I don't like reading incest stuff with very few exceptions, and you might think the fact that they arent blood brothers is good, but I feel like it kind of is an excuse to make it "not as bad" as true incest. Imo, if it really was incest and Ilodel was a genuine Rockfurt who was born a beta, it would be more interesting. It feels kinda hand-wavy for them to be like "we arent REALLY" brothers.I think this story works best when its more disgusting, ikwim. I want mc to throw up out of sheer disgust and horror at what is happening to him. When you read something like this, it should feel like a gut punch. It should feel as wrong as possible.