okay so.. the art got a little bit better around chapter 20-ish, the characters’ proportions are still pretty bad it’s disappointing, as the plot itself is nice, the art style kind of ruins the reading experience. i’m glad i’m not the only one who thinks that way…. their dicks were the weirdest dicks i’ve ever seen in my life, i love uncensored smut stories but please gosh bring back light sabers for this one
the story itself is pretty cute. the characters, as CRINGEY and embarrassing as they are, match each other perfectly, so it’s not that agonizing to read. i did feel icky many times while reading this, because all i could think about was that alien meme where they hold each other, their front/ sticking to each other.
one thing that i also disliked was the story’s pace. the way they got together was so odd to me, it was way too fast and strange. really unrealistic… there’s also too many smut scenes, i wish we could see more mundane / cute domestic scenes instead of everytime they do something it automatically leads to sex. so yeah the pace is a bit off
in all, it’s a cute story, i guess worth reading, it’s a light read and it’s pretty adorable. their clinginess is heartwarming sometimes
okay so.. the art got a little bit better around chapter 20-ish, the characters’ proportions are still pretty bad it’s disappointing, as the plot itself is nice, the art style kind of ruins the reading experience. i’m glad i’m not the only one who thinks that way…. their dicks were the weirdest dicks i’ve ever seen in my life, i love uncensored smut stories but please gosh bring back light sabers for this one
the story itself is pretty cute. the characters, as CRINGEY and embarrassing as they are, match each other perfectly, so it’s not that agonizing to read. i did feel icky many times while reading this, because all i could think about was that alien meme where they hold each other, their front/ sticking to each other.
one thing that i also disliked was the story’s pace. the way they got together was so odd to me, it was way too fast and strange. really unrealistic… there’s also too many smut scenes, i wish we could see more mundane / cute domestic scenes instead of everytime they do something it automatically leads to sex. so yeah the pace is a bit off
in all, it’s a cute story, i guess worth reading, it’s a light read and it’s pretty adorable. their clinginess is heartwarming sometimes