I'm glad to see I'm not alone in feeling like the pacing is a mess and the smut is out of nowhere... First I was wondering how ML could be that jealous and touchy without realizing his feelings, not because some people can't be that touchy or that it could take time for him to realize anyway, but because he is clearly different with MC than with anyone else. Like laser focus. It's too much for it to not be strange, at least I as a reader was sure that he loved him and knew about MC himself prior the recording or something. Every actions he takes towards the MC is flirty or over friendly at the very least.
Don't get me wrong, I loved it and it's cute. Even the fact that he doesn't get his own feelings himself is fun and cute. But then it needed to be more subtle, like him being friendly with everyone but getting territorial over MC for exemple.
But then, they had to mess everything further with this out of nowhere, whut? And you're telling me that in the novel it's not like that, but a lot slower ?
I'm glad to see I'm not alone in feeling like the pacing is a mess and the smut is out of nowhere... First I was wondering how ML could be that jealous and touchy without realizing his feelings, not because some people can't be that touchy or that it could take time for him to realize anyway, but because he is clearly different with MC than with anyone else. Like laser focus. It's too much for it to not be strange, at least I as a reader was sure that he loved him and knew about MC himself prior the recording or something. Every actions he takes towards the MC is flirty or over friendly at the very least.
Don't get me wrong, I loved it and it's cute. Even the fact that he doesn't get his own feelings himself is fun and cute. But then it needed to be more subtle, like him being friendly with everyone but getting territorial over MC for exemple.
But then, they had to mess everything further with this out of nowhere, whut? And you're telling me that in the novel it's not like that, but a lot slower ?