Idk what it was about the story but I just couldn’t get into it… the art is gorgeous and the plot seemed promising, but I think maybe the dialogue was too unnatural. The narration dragged on the plot and the dialogue felt more like a badly written screenplay than an actual conversation.
Idk what it was about the story but I just couldn’t get into it… the art is gorgeous and the plot seemed promising, but I think maybe the dialogue was too unnatural. The narration dragged on the plot and the dialogue felt more like a badly written screenplay than an actual conversation.