for the love of god stop writing bdsm tropes if one of them is uncomfortable… why would anyone want to read a sex scene where they are not both comfortable!!!!1!1!1!1!!!
the main problem with this story is the misunderstandings omfg they misunderstand almost everything each other say… so they shouldn't even be doing this if the author wont make them communicate
for the love of god stop writing bdsm tropes if one of them is uncomfortable… why would anyone want to read a sex scene where they are not both comfortable!!!!1!1!1!1!!!