Ngl I don’t remember them from the Pearl Boy story but it has been like…3 years and I had no idea they did a side story a year later. So I’m reading this like it is its own thing. I’m at chapter…17 or something around there. The thing is, I like parts of their relationship but I rlly don’t like other parts…and the parts I don’t like keep repeating in different places. I’m understanding why the MC and ML are the way they are…but there is no character progression. The author is too busy showing us their past and mixing into their present moments. Up-to now I think the story is fine, the only problem is how it’s been arranged and makes the reader feels like they have indigestion.
Ngl I don’t remember them from the Pearl Boy story but it has been like…3 years and I had no idea they did a side story a year later. So I’m reading this like it is its own thing. I’m at chapter…17 or something around there. The thing is, I like parts of their relationship but I rlly don’t like other parts…and the parts I don’t like keep repeating in different places. I’m understanding why the MC and ML are the way they are…but there is no character progression. The author is too busy showing us their past and mixing into their present moments. Up-to now I think the story is fine, the only problem is how it’s been arranged and makes the reader feels like they have indigestion.