I see a lot of comments about it but I'll join too, the plot was really poorly written, the story overall wouldn't even be bad but it's the execution that throws this whole thing off, MC is very one dimensional and whatever happens to him I don't see him dwelling on it for example after the Esper assault near the middle of the reading. He just doesn't feel like his own person. And a lot of the plot was brushed over like that, as if they wanted to speedrun the story but of course the sex is multiple chapters long God forbid we put that work into the story instead. And I also don't know what the beginning of this story was about like the first scene I didn't find connection with that and the rest of the story, I wouldn't say it's a deal breaker because overall it's a light read, but pretty poor on the writing department
I see a lot of comments about it but I'll join too, the plot was really poorly written, the story overall wouldn't even be bad but it's the execution that throws this whole thing off, MC is very one dimensional and whatever happens to him I don't see him dwelling on it for example after the Esper assault near the middle of the reading. He just doesn't feel like his own person.
And a lot of the plot was brushed over like that, as if they wanted to speedrun the story but of course the sex is multiple chapters long God forbid we put that work into the story instead.
And I also don't know what the beginning of this story was about like the first scene I didn't find connection with that and the rest of the story, I wouldn't say it's a deal breaker because overall it's a light read, but pretty poor on the writing department