While I don't have a problem with the story and TJ (there's obviously something wrong with him and his psyche) but it's just dragging out. Author needs to use TJ's bad mental health to create suspenseful situations so the chapters feel like im actually reading something and stuff is happening. But its sooooo badly paced.
While I don't have a problem with the story and TJ (there's obviously something wrong with him and his psyche) but it's just dragging out. Author needs to use TJ's bad mental health to create suspenseful situations so the chapters feel like im actually reading something and stuff is happening. But its sooooo badly paced.