This story feels like it has too many elements put out everywhere that it's starting to look messy imo. First the FL's story then it branches to the people she's helped teach around her or aid them in their times of need, then the ML's entrance to the story which was weird as well. The way they placed the premise of his feelings for her, showing their past in the academy wasn't really justfying him showing his undying loyalty toward her. The way they introduced the duchess and made their relationship strained and furthered it with the children saying they wished FL was their mother... they didn't elaborate on that any further.. they proceeded to do a segue towards jane and do the whole watchdog thing then went to the latest chapter about a curse on the duke? I mean come on... focus on a few elements and stick to that. At this point I don't even know what the main character's objectives are in this world. What is she meant to do? Idk this story is lacking a strong foundation and a lot of elements do not have enough justification to even be included in the story. I'm only staying for mikhail but honestly if the next chapters don't give anything more to the story I'm out. It's a shame but it's too messy.
This story feels like it has too many elements put out everywhere that it's starting to look messy imo. First the FL's story then it branches to the people she's helped teach around her or aid them in their times of need, then the ML's entrance to the story which was weird as well. The way they placed the premise of his feelings for her, showing their past in the academy wasn't really justfying him showing his undying loyalty toward her. The way they introduced the duchess and made their relationship strained and furthered it with the children saying they wished FL was their mother... they didn't elaborate on that any further.. they proceeded to do a segue towards jane and do the whole watchdog thing then went to the latest chapter about a curse on the duke? I mean come on... focus on a few elements and stick to that. At this point I don't even know what the main character's objectives are in this world. What is she meant to do? Idk this story is lacking a strong foundation and a lot of elements do not have enough justification to even be included in the story. I'm only staying for mikhail but honestly if the next chapters don't give anything more to the story I'm out. It's a shame but it's too messy.