It looks more like a base for a longer work with pretty good potential. Like a teaser. So many things you can expound upon for world building, especially Heart's relationship with his father. It's an interesting choice to not give him a name (there are few works that could pull this off, usually psychological and first-person stories), but this just reads as taking selective panels from a storyboard and using them for the final draft. And this is the finished product. Still an interesting read though.
It looks more like a base for a longer work with pretty good potential. Like a teaser. So many things you can expound upon for world building, especially Heart's relationship with his father. It's an interesting choice to not give him a name (there are few works that could pull this off, usually psychological and first-person stories), but this just reads as taking selective panels from a storyboard and using them for the final draft. And this is the finished product. Still an interesting read though.