I just finished reading chapter 11 and the ML is a piece of shit, and I've already seen a few comments that indicate he doesn't get any better.
Just because you realize that your high school crush works under you at a job, doesn't give any reason for you to be an asshole. And don't even with the bullshit about it not being about getting rejected as a kid. If the MC had that bad of a work ethic he would've been fired before he reached working a year. The MC is doing his job the best that he can, forcing more work on him because you find it funny is terrible.
I've already seen the few comments stating that there really isn't any love in the story they just have sex a bunch. I'm down for smut it nice, but if it doesn't have at least a bit of connection in it. It's not good, and the comment stating that the ML doesn't listen to the MC during sex either and blames it not being able to help himself is disgusting.
Chapter 14 where MC is drunk and trying to figure out why the ML is being so rude at work towards him. He should know by now it's got to be at least 20-40% because the ML got rejected as a kid. Like I said above, there's no way it's all because of MC not doing his work correctly. You already made the MC cry out of stress and being given unnecessary task, and all for what? The expressions he makes is funny/cute to you when he's distressed? If your sadistic go work in a field that allows for that, don't bully an office worker who is only trying to work to support his siblings.
The MC's character isn't great either, I understand that he falls/likes people who are good looking. That's is screwed up in a way, but even so it's his choice, he simply has a type, and everyone is allowed that.
Okay I'm dropping!!
Chapter 16 MC is HIGHLY intoxicated and you force yourself on him? Regardless if MC likes you, you don't fuking touch someone who can't consent. I hate this, I'm so tired of authors using the MC or ML drinking as away to sneak in a smut scene. Consent can't be given in this state!!
I just finished reading chapter 11 and the ML is a piece of shit, and I've already seen a few comments that indicate he doesn't get any better.
Just because you realize that your high school crush works under you at a job, doesn't give any reason for you to be an asshole. And don't even with the bullshit about it not being about getting rejected as a kid. If the MC had that bad of a work ethic he would've been fired before he reached working a year. The MC is doing his job the best that he can, forcing more work on him because you find it funny is terrible.
I've already seen the few comments stating that there really isn't any love in the story they just have sex a bunch. I'm down for smut it nice, but if it doesn't have at least a bit of connection in it. It's not good, and the comment stating that the ML doesn't listen to the MC during sex either and blames it not being able to help himself is disgusting.
Chapter 14 where MC is drunk and trying to figure out why the ML is being so rude at work towards him. He should know by now it's got to be at least 20-40% because the ML got rejected as a kid. Like I said above, there's no way it's all because of MC not doing his work correctly. You already made the MC cry out of stress and being given unnecessary task, and all for what? The expressions he makes is funny/cute to you when he's distressed? If your sadistic go work in a field that allows for that, don't bully an office worker who is only trying to work to support his siblings.
The MC's character isn't great either, I understand that he falls/likes people who are good looking. That's is screwed up in a way, but even so it's his choice, he simply has a type, and everyone is allowed that.
Okay I'm dropping!!
Chapter 16 MC is HIGHLY intoxicated and you force yourself on him? Regardless if MC likes you, you don't fuking touch someone who can't consent. I hate this, I'm so tired of authors using the MC or ML drinking as away to sneak in a smut scene. Consent can't be given in this state!!