Responses
Ya'll don't have to read this, it was mostly just me getting my thoughts together and I honestly feel way better now doing so.
I would love to know what you guys think abt it tho you did give it a read.
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**if you did give it a read**
Oh snap its not completed, i'm actually a little distraught for the first time in a while.
What that first girl did actually made me feel so Icky cuz she traded something stable and loving for a quick rush of dopamine with the popular dude.
She was only a victim until the moment she pushed her ex away and feed into his torment. Despite all that, is it weird that I want her to be forgiven?
Hear me out, the MC is getting his life together again and is growing from this heartbreak. He shouldn't have to deal with the fact that his childhood is tainted with the memories of a girl that decided to be a slut.
Point 2, they are all young and dumb, I mean we all are at that age. She practically lost everything and by the looks of it, she feels so irredeemable that I feel like her future might actually be way worse than what the MC is experiencing right now. And also by the looks of it her future self will be deluded with all sorts of excuses and may never recover and may never notice the downfall until she dies on a street somewhere.
No one really deserves that, I don't want her to go through that. Do I want a redemption? No, maybe, idk. Do I want to want the scars to fade for all the characters involved? Yes absolutely.
Notice how I didn't say anything abt the narcissistic soccer player? Its because he doesn't matter in the slightest and knowing his nature, he practically already dug a hole 6 ft under. I couldn't be bothered.