i think it really suffers from being such a short story. the premise is nice, the characters are interesting and funny, the art is pretty. But the flow feels disjointed with the time skips. the back and forth between mc and ml, and the relationship development has great potential if developed more. Plus seeing them in college would be awesome.
i think it really suffers from being such a short story. the premise is nice, the characters are interesting and funny, the art is pretty. But the flow feels disjointed with the time skips. the back and forth between mc and ml, and the relationship development has great potential if developed more. Plus seeing them in college would be awesome.
all in all a cute read tho, still like it