This concept and theme is right up my alley and the art is really nice. I feel like it wou...

This concept and theme is right up my alley and the art is really nice. I feel like it would’ve needed to be at least twice as long in chapter length to achieve actually effective pacing, though. Overall, characters and tensions all feel so.. flat. Not to mention the complete neglect of really interesting characters and specific details that had so much potential to bring the setting to life! While I feel it’s paced as best as it could be in the amount of chapters it has, it fails at ever being truly immersive. Fun and cute read overall, just a little bit disappointing