The pacing is too fast, all the events happen in the span of 5 panels and it makes everything feel so surface level. The moment she deals with the duchess supposed to hit hard, but I swipe and it’s over like? Also, the ml was basically emotionally cheating on his gf with the mc…
The pacing is too fast, all the events happen in the span of 5 panels and it makes everything feel so surface level. The moment she deals with the duchess supposed to hit hard, but I swipe and it’s over like? Also, the ml was basically emotionally cheating on his gf with the mc…