Everything is good from plot to characters, I wish the events leading up to the plot twist and the revelation were more executed properly, or in another way, so it comes with a bang instead cuz I feel like it lost it's supposed surprise effect to readers at some point. Anticlimactic. But either way, good story.
Everything is good from plot to characters, I wish the events leading up to the plot twist and the revelation were more executed properly, or in another way, so it comes with a bang instead cuz I feel like it lost it's supposed surprise effect to readers at some point. Anticlimactic. But either way, good story.