Ngl i don't have a big problem with the story and the characters, but everything just feels so exposition-y, and the dialogue's feels kinda fake, every chapter someone goes on a tangent to explain something of the world, and the way they talk is also always like they're trying to give exposition instead of just talking like real people.
Ngl i don't have a big problem with the story and the characters, but everything just feels so exposition-y, and the dialogue's feels kinda fake, every chapter someone goes on a tangent to explain something of the world, and the way they talk is also always like they're trying to give exposition instead of just talking like real people.