Yo, warning this is just my personal opinion. If you disagree on my views it's totally fine.
Postive takes:
Before i bush my words through the window, I'll see stepped into the positive of the story.
The story was good, introducing the MC who was teleported from the other world, the basics, you get me.
Through out the chapters, I was getting along how the MC will get back and the scenes that are important. (Scrapt the sex scenes). Knowing that she was a swan and in fact that the ML and ML son is her family. Also doubles up.
I was completely fine with the obssession and the whole reasoning of the story.
Good flow and the pacing.
Negative:
But here's the worse parts.
Personally, the first few chapters of the story was okay until the fucked up chapter, even putting the *a scene that is really disgusting to read, i just wanna scream*.
I don't get it why add that, i guess because ML saw that FL is his past wife and just decided to *disturbing shit* like why (??)
I kinda get it the hating your wife for abandoning you but you do not get to decide to treat someone like that.
I like the FL at first but then it's become obnoxious after being like a dumbass. She should act logically in spite of the troubles that she's dealing with. It's hard to process the entire thing but the FL already know what she's dealing with, at least find a way to act not to be submissive to it.
Same flow I read all of it until I hit the part where it reveal that the Swan is the FL. Okay, getting the flow right? Until
Boom, the whole side story shows up, how did it AAAALL BEGAN.
WHEN THE ML has finally shown what he used to be; I understand why he was angry with his dead wife because she abandoned him. After reading the recent chapters and getting the side story on how Ianna went through.
Ianna was really worred about her mother, get it. Mother is alone, her father died. She's on the pace of dealing the guilt of her mother being alone. I feel her girl then yes.
During her time with goodie ML back then, she played along yes. Then his father decided to bullshit with her. I get her, she's mad. She wants to go home but then-
She got pregnant for an exchange to return right? Seem reasonable. But then, SHE DIDN'T TOLD HIM WAY BEFORE THE BIRTH OF THEIR CHILD.
Which I get it, why she decided to not, because it's a not his business. Girl it's his business now because you know why???
Like girl why would you leave the man, when he totally know that you're from the other world, he trusted you, hell even gave a damn flower that you missed in your world. Hell even promise to go on the beach. Helping her back anyway he could. Brother this fucker is in love with you.
Ianna is afraid to tell him, but then again, you saw how his eyes is gleaming onto you. Fuck bro if i was in the world. You get to think thoroughly what you're seeing.
You don't have to deal this on your Ianna, hell even Ruth even stated, she doesn't have to deal with this on her own. You just gotta open up.
What the HELL DID YOU GUYS DO FOR TEN YEARS?! JUST FUCKING???? OH MY FUCKING GOD, THERE'S A TIME IN THE WORLD WHERE TO WORK THIS OUT.
I don't get it why she didn't chose to be honest with him that her mother is alone and needed an aid instead of doing it during the red moon.
Second, i think the issue i have dealt with was how the character development. Ruth who was quiet, sweet, and hot. We get to have the view of him being the kind person if you fully understand them.
Then it all fucked up, after Ianna stated it.
I'm not trying to side with Ruth. I'm learning how to understand two characters that are written for dark romance.
I guess it was an ick but because I chose to read this, for the sake of learning how to write a character and story.
Yes, i vent it because i really love the story it's just fucked up and I hate how it was written. Ianna literally wasted ten years of her life in that world trying to figure how to get home.
Yo, warning this is just my personal opinion. If you disagree on my views it's totally fine.
Postive takes:
Before i bush my words through the window, I'll see stepped into the positive of the story.
The story was good, introducing the MC who was teleported from the other world, the basics, you get me.
Through out the chapters, I was getting along how the MC will get back and the scenes that are important. (Scrapt the sex scenes). Knowing that she was a swan and in fact that the ML and ML son is her family. Also doubles up.
I was completely fine with the obssession and the whole reasoning of the story.
Good flow and the pacing.
Negative:
But here's the worse parts.
Personally, the first few chapters of the story was okay until the fucked up chapter, even putting the *a scene that is really disgusting to read, i just wanna scream*.
I don't get it why add that, i guess because ML saw that FL is his past wife and just decided to *disturbing shit* like why (??)
I kinda get it the hating your wife for abandoning you but you do not get to decide to treat someone like that.
I like the FL at first but then it's become obnoxious after being like a dumbass. She should act logically in spite of the troubles that she's dealing with. It's hard to process the entire thing but the FL already know what she's dealing with, at least find a way to act not to be submissive to it.
Same flow I read all of it until I hit the part where it reveal that the Swan is the FL. Okay, getting the flow right? Until
Boom, the whole side story shows up, how did it AAAALL BEGAN.
WHEN THE ML has finally shown what he used to be; I understand why he was angry with his dead wife because she abandoned him. After reading the recent chapters and getting the side story on how Ianna went through.
Ianna was really worred about her mother, get it. Mother is alone, her father died. She's on the pace of dealing the guilt of her mother being alone. I feel her girl then yes.
During her time with goodie ML back then, she played along yes. Then his father decided to bullshit with her. I get her, she's mad. She wants to go home but then-
She got pregnant for an exchange to return right? Seem reasonable. But then, SHE DIDN'T TOLD HIM WAY BEFORE THE BIRTH OF THEIR CHILD.
Which I get it, why she decided to not, because it's a not his business. Girl it's his business now because you know why???
Like girl why would you leave the man, when he totally know that you're from the other world, he trusted you, hell even gave a damn flower that you missed in your world. Hell even promise to go on the beach. Helping her back anyway he could. Brother this fucker is in love with you.
Ianna is afraid to tell him, but then again, you saw how his eyes is gleaming onto you. Fuck bro if i was in the world. You get to think thoroughly what you're seeing.
You don't have to deal this on your Ianna, hell even Ruth even stated, she doesn't have to deal with this on her own. You just gotta open up.
What the HELL DID YOU GUYS DO FOR TEN YEARS?! JUST FUCKING???? OH MY FUCKING GOD, THERE'S A TIME IN THE WORLD WHERE TO WORK THIS OUT.
I don't get it why she didn't chose to be honest with him that her mother is alone and needed an aid instead of doing it during the red moon.
Second, i think the issue i have dealt with was how the character development. Ruth who was quiet, sweet, and hot. We get to have the view of him being the kind person if you fully understand them.
Then it all fucked up, after Ianna stated it.
I'm not trying to side with Ruth. I'm learning how to understand two characters that are written for dark romance.
I guess it was an ick but because I chose to read this, for the sake of learning how to write a character and story.
Yes, i vent it because i really love the story it's just fucked up and I hate how it was written. Ianna literally wasted ten years of her life in that world trying to figure how to get home.