What in the raggedy ass mf plot is this manhwa tryna prove bro? I have read a whole lot of toxic bullshit that yaoi has to offer, but this one just takes the cake for how ass it is with a serving of slop.
First of all, the translations. Dawg I can't understand a single sentence that comes out of these characters' mouths because either this was done from using a translator— but damn, ATLEAST try to make the entire thing make sense. I am over here trying to give this manhwa a chance and so far it's only giving me headaches. Plus, the other scangroups trying to overpost each other.
NOW WHO THE FUCK UPLOADED THE CHAPTERS ABOUT THE MACHINE DEBT PLOT??? WHERE DID YOU GET THAT! IM INTO CHAPTER 8 AND ITS BACK TO CHAPTER 1 WITH A WHOLE ASS NEW PLOT ARE YOU KIDDING ME.
Now onto the plot, I do hope, this gangster ass looking guy get his ass egregiously handed to him. Like seriously, I have never seen a nothingburger of a ML until this guy. Whoever was cooking in the kitchen... BETTER LEAVE THAT ESTABLISHMENT BECAUSE WHAT THEY WERE COOKING AIN'T IT. How you gon' have a whole ML and still have his design look like the background character from Jinx I legit thought the dead husband's brother was gonna be ML, so you can imagine just how done I am well into chapter 5 once I realize that this DEAD HUSBAND'S BROTHER was just redundant as hell. BRO LITERALLY LEFT THE MC ALONE AND THE PLOT TOO IG ????
I can barely even remember every character's name as well. That's just how messy and unremarkable each of them are. 'Things I can't do' and MC literally took it seriously.
That ML needs to be put down bcs from the get-go what do you mean you're already kissing this other dude when THIS CHILD is RIGHT THERE. I'm like staring in horror and yelling to myself, cuz dawg that ain't right! This guy's brains be in his knees because all he does is 1. Curse insensibly and 2. Sexually assault random dudes
I know, I know. If I don't like it I better not read this through is what you're thinking. Well, like Jinx, I am trying to give this story a chance because the art is the only saving grace atp and I've heard it gets somewhat better later on (?? Jinx was so ass too i hated that shit but yeah)
I do believe that dark tropes, when done right, could tell a pretty good story. But when you have Jinx wannabe gangsta here having little to no actual relevance in the begining, you kind of start to wonder what the fuck is this guy's problem. You see what I'm saying here? Not even a single mention of that scar on his face, just going in staright to threaten MC to hell and back AS IF this guy had any threathening aura to begin with. NIGGA U KISSED HIM WHILE HIS CHILD IS SANDWICHED IN THE MIDDLE ON GODS GREEN EARTH YOU NEED TO DIE.
ANYWAYS,
I digress.
The uploading schedule is a mess and the story's a mess. Everyone a whole damn mess.
What in the raggedy ass mf plot is this manhwa tryna prove bro? I have read a whole lot of toxic bullshit that yaoi has to offer, but this one just takes the cake for how ass it is with a serving of slop.
First of all, the translations. Dawg I can't understand a single sentence that comes out of these characters' mouths because either this was done from using a translator— but damn, ATLEAST try to make the entire thing make sense. I am over here trying to give this manhwa a chance and so far it's only giving me headaches. Plus, the other scangroups trying to overpost each other.
NOW WHO THE FUCK UPLOADED THE CHAPTERS ABOUT THE MACHINE DEBT PLOT??? WHERE DID YOU GET THAT! IM INTO CHAPTER 8 AND ITS BACK TO CHAPTER 1 WITH A WHOLE ASS NEW PLOT ARE YOU KIDDING ME.
Now onto the plot, I do hope, this gangster ass looking guy get his ass egregiously handed to him. Like seriously, I have never seen a nothingburger of a ML until this guy. Whoever was cooking in the kitchen... BETTER LEAVE THAT ESTABLISHMENT BECAUSE WHAT THEY WERE COOKING AIN'T IT. How you gon' have a whole ML and still have his design look like the background character from Jinx I legit thought the dead husband's brother was gonna be ML, so you can imagine just how done I am well into chapter 5 once I realize that this DEAD HUSBAND'S BROTHER was just redundant as hell. BRO LITERALLY LEFT THE MC ALONE AND THE PLOT TOO IG ????
I can barely even remember every character's name as well. That's just how messy and unremarkable each of them are. 'Things I can't do' and MC literally took it seriously.
That ML needs to be put down bcs from the get-go what do you mean you're already kissing this other dude when THIS CHILD is RIGHT THERE. I'm like staring in horror and yelling to myself, cuz dawg that ain't right! This guy's brains be in his knees because all he does is 1. Curse insensibly and 2. Sexually assault random dudes
I know, I know. If I don't like it I better not read this through is what you're thinking. Well, like Jinx, I am trying to give this story a chance because the art is the only saving grace atp and I've heard it gets somewhat better later on (?? Jinx was so ass too i hated that shit but yeah)
I do believe that dark tropes, when done right, could tell a pretty good story. But when you have Jinx wannabe gangsta here having little to no actual relevance in the begining, you kind of start to wonder what the fuck is this guy's problem. You see what I'm saying here? Not even a single mention of that scar on his face, just going in staright to threaten MC to hell and back AS IF this guy had any threathening aura to begin with. NIGGA U KISSED HIM WHILE HIS CHILD IS SANDWICHED IN THE MIDDLE ON GODS GREEN EARTH YOU NEED TO DIE.
ANYWAYS,
I digress.
The uploading schedule is a mess and the story's a mess. Everyone a whole damn mess.
Peace.