It's not even that bad it's just the average bl story that mainly focuses on smut then story , my main criticism for this story is that... it's not really cohesive not in the way you can't understand anything at all but the way past events & current events are presented overall the structuring of the story, i personally think random bits of past interactions randomly appear or don't fit in the current chapter i believe there was other better ways to present it. Another thing is, why add the neighbor and make him kiss the mc if he.... wasn't gonna be utilized in the story, like at all? Wow shock factor then his job is done.... It's like a developer adding a villain to their game then making them drop no loot or have no usage to the lore... i find this the most weird thing about this story????? The ml looks hot tho, the smut was pretty nice i would recommend if you want a story that's somewhat comprehensible and smut.
It's not even that bad it's just the average bl story that mainly focuses on smut then story , my main criticism for this story is that... it's not really cohesive not in the way you can't understand anything at all but the way past events & current events are presented overall the structuring of the story, i personally think random bits of past interactions randomly appear or don't fit in the current chapter i believe there was other better ways to present it. Another thing is, why add the neighbor and make him kiss the mc if he.... wasn't gonna be utilized in the story, like at all? Wow shock factor then his job is done.... It's like a developer adding a villain to their game then making them drop no loot or have no usage to the lore... i find this the most weird thing about this story????? The ml looks hot tho, the smut was pretty nice i would recommend if you want a story that's somewhat comprehensible and smut.