I binge read this the whole night… I THOUGHT THIS WAS SO CUTIEEE
It’s a short lil story imo the ML isn’t flushed out enough imo and there were some points where I’m thinking hmmm why can’t they just communicate before doing the do and not do the do and then communicate YKWIM??
The top is SOOOO IN LOVE WITH THE ML and it ties in together nicely they both fell in love at first sight in their own ways. I like how the ML is just so in love with the bottom. At the start you gotta bare with the nonchalant act but I think it’s mutual in a way where it’s two characters who are navigating trying to be in a relationship.
Also the plot points they were a few brushed passes like with that really mean co worker but honestly I like this better than Love Jinx. Also I’m still on the way the Tops backstory wasn’t really talked about aside from oh bro had a glow up. Like we don’t know the top as much as we know about the MC which yes it’s how it should be but it doesn’t feel balanced at all.
I honestly just love when a top worships the ground the bottom walks on. It’s a cute story in a way that their backgrounds aren’t fleshed out and it’s more focused on the relationship between them.
I binge read this the whole night… I THOUGHT THIS WAS SO CUTIEEE
It’s a short lil story imo the ML isn’t flushed out enough imo and there were some points where I’m thinking hmmm why can’t they just communicate before doing the do and not do the do and then communicate YKWIM??
The top is SOOOO IN LOVE WITH THE ML and it ties in together nicely they both fell in love at first sight in their own ways. I like how the ML is just so in love with the bottom. At the start you gotta bare with the nonchalant act but I think it’s mutual in a way where it’s two characters who are navigating trying to be in a relationship.
Also the plot points they were a few brushed passes like with that really mean co worker but honestly I like this better than Love Jinx. Also I’m still on the way the Tops backstory wasn’t really talked about aside from oh bro had a glow up. Like we don’t know the top as much as we know about the MC which yes it’s how it should be but it doesn’t feel balanced at all.
I honestly just love when a top worships the ground the bottom walks on. It’s a cute story in a way that their backgrounds aren’t fleshed out and it’s more focused on the relationship between them.