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I like the top in this story but something important always seems to be missing in the plo...

Halo August 17, 2026 6:04 am

I like the top in this story but something important always seems to be missing in the plot otherwise it's good

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    Conn44 August 17, 2026 8:32 am

    Maybe because the author didn't really drag their past lives plot?

    Halo August 17, 2026 10:55 am
    Maybe because the author didn't really drag their past lives plot? Conn44

    The past live made sense but the present storyline seems to miss a punch and I had the impression author didn't want to drag it too long but it's my opinion lol ( ̄▽ ̄)