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read this shi for three hours straight to have it be a goddamn mess with like no ending satisfaction (though during early-mid i was very very satisfied and intrigued this geniunely had rlly good potential even if Ordin was endgame, ik i seem bias to Fenrir)
nah i was loving it until he started flip flopping between the two i was gen so fucking lost plus the background plot there were so many unexplained holes why make it seem like comedy with a dark subplot to not actually expand into it omg… i did love the comedy though but lord the writing was some hot hot shit all over the place
and like why could i literally not actually determine what he feelings were at all and I genuinely did not like Ordin, fenrir for life that past life stuff was geniunely pulled out of the ass i swear the author was trying to go for making him a villain second male lead (first flashback) then changed their FUCKING MIND OH MY LORD
and the ending was jus so so rushed like there was no build up and it felt like the author got tired of the serious subplot and just smacked all the lore (with a million missing info bits) in the span of three chapters and then did the shit with fenrir’s ending I GUESS BC THE AUTHOR DECIDED AFTER FLIP FLOPPING THAT ORDIN WAS GONNA BE ENDGAME FUCK TBH AT THE BEGINNING I WAS LIKE YO I WOULDNT MIND ORDIN BEING ENDGAME THE STUFF WITH CHILDHOOD LOVE IS CUTE PLUS SEEMS LIKE THERES SOME PAST LIFE STUFF
then the past life stuff was geniunely outragoues like are we fr, he wakes up from being a child to being an adult, sits on the dudes face and literally gets violated by him (story’s words not mine) which makes him into a sex addict with attachment issues, which fenrir awakens him from and makes him realize stuff, BUT I SWEAR THE AUTHOR HERE CHANGES THEIR MIND AND GOES OH NAH BUT HE LOVES ORDIN SO MUCH LIKE ALL OF THIS IS HIS FAULT FOR MEETING ORDIN LIKE BABE
IMO IM SEEING THIS AS LIKE AKIN TO STOCKHOLM SYNDROME KINDA LOVE BUT ABSO NO DYNAMIC OR PLOT WRITTEN TO IT.
LIKE CMON IF YOU WANTED ORDIN TO BE THE ENDGAME WRITE THAT PAST LIFE SHIT MYCH BETTER OTHERWISE MAKE IT MY BEST BOY FENRIR