It's good it's good. I love the unreliable narration pov since we are mostly viewing the story in the pov of the woman and not directly from the seme and uke itself. It's got a different flavor to it. I love how flawed every characters is, it is a delight when stories doesn't have a black and white good evil characters. It's got a whole lot of violence and its not justified so be careful on that.
It's good it's good. I love the unreliable narration pov since we are mostly viewing the story in the pov of the woman and not directly from the seme and uke itself. It's got a different flavor to it. I love how flawed every characters is, it is a delight when stories doesn't have a black and white good evil characters. It's got a whole lot of violence and its not justified so be careful on that.