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Overall, it was a flully story, BUT it's like a fragment of the story rather than a contin...

Cade August 19, 2026 1:34 pm

Overall, it was a flully story, BUT it's like a fragment of the story rather than a continuous. There is no explanation on what happened before on every character when they weren't in jail or how they were in jail exactly. Also, the other details are not explained enough. It's just progressing like in a straight line, not like a roots or branch that could make this interesting enough. There is not enough romantic progression on every couple. The other details were left behind it's like they said "nope I'm not explaining that thing and move on, guys." Like what, you just left there with that detail and expect us to forget WTF?!

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    Temp August 19, 2026 1:37 pm

    I agree, the story needs to blend a little better. But overall, it’s great