I don't think it's terrible. The characters have a lot of personality. The main issue is side characters have too much personality. I care and like them a whole lot more. The way the author just jumps right into the relationship without letting us see how it started, is a huge draw back. The main black haired (bh) is a spoiled price type character. While the blonde is supposed to be a big brother type. You don't get to see that, by having us in the middle of the relationship dynamic. And because the creator starts us in the middle and takes so much time developing the side characters, she forces the main couple together making it feel forced. It's not bad, like how the comments are making it seem. I have seen bad (Love is an illusion). Pretty cute read, just suspend expectations
I don't think it's terrible. The characters have a lot of personality. The main issue is side characters have too much personality. I care and like them a whole lot more. The way the author just jumps right into the relationship without letting us see how it started, is a huge draw back. The main black haired (bh) is a spoiled price type character. While the blonde is supposed to be a big brother type. You don't get to see that, by having us in the middle of the relationship dynamic. And because the creator starts us in the middle and takes so much time developing the side characters, she forces the main couple together making it feel forced. It's not bad, like how the comments are making it seem. I have seen bad (Love is an illusion). Pretty cute read, just suspend expectations