It was a decent story but I think there are a few plot holes and some things that could have been explained better. In particular, we don't know enough about the female founder or how the stone was created. Some characters and their motivations could have been explored more. I think the story had an interesting concept, but it left too many questions unanswered.
It was a decent story but I think there are a few plot holes and some things that could have been explained better. In particular, we don't know enough about the female founder or how the stone was created. Some characters and their motivations could have been explored more. I think the story had an interesting concept, but it left too many questions unanswered.