This is actually the most fast paced shit ever….it kept going and then switching up….first it was the bottom finding the top and then him sucking his dick and they have some kind of backstory then to them fucking after finding each other again for two days??? What even was the amount of time between the highschool thing and university? And then they got together just like that. Then time skip to more chapters after “the end”….to them fucking and happy or whatever and then they have a small conflict of blackboard dude not wanting their relationship known yet and then he says that stupid shit which was the whole reason he quit judo cuz some dude said homophobic shit like that so why the hell did he turn around and do the same to brown haired guy??? I get he didn’t want their relationship out but he didn’t have to say that shit about throwing up whenever he’s alone with him?? And then they fight and bottom gets angry and says some shit back and top starts crying and suddenly everything is okay after they talk a bit and mostly cuz of his tears and then they fuck…..
Author really got the most out of their story though cuz why they had a “rivalry” at the beginning and th top was very dominant & bottom kinda submissive ish with the harsh first time and then the last chapters they fuck its he’s a crybaby top and the bottom had some dominance….just a lot…but not too bad compared to other short bls…
This is actually the most fast paced shit ever….it kept going and then switching up….first it was the bottom finding the top and then him sucking his dick and they have some kind of backstory then to them fucking after finding each other again for two days??? What even was the amount of time between the highschool thing and university? And then they got together just like that. Then time skip to more chapters after “the end”….to them fucking and happy or whatever and then they have a small conflict of blackboard dude not wanting their relationship known yet and then he says that stupid shit which was the whole reason he quit judo cuz some dude said homophobic shit like that so why the hell did he turn around and do the same to brown haired guy??? I get he didn’t want their relationship out but he didn’t have to say that shit about throwing up whenever he’s alone with him?? And then they fight and bottom gets angry and says some shit back and top starts crying and suddenly everything is okay after they talk a bit and mostly cuz of his tears and then they fuck…..
Author really got the most out of their story though cuz why they had a “rivalry” at the beginning and th top was very dominant & bottom kinda submissive ish with the harsh first time and then the last chapters they fuck its he’s a crybaby top and the bottom had some dominance….just a lot…but not too bad compared to other short bls…