Before anybody says “if you don’t like don’t read” we’ll just like Nox is the physical personification of the greed talked in the bible, I tend to have the kind of ego that doesn’t let me let things go. I will read something to the end to 1. Get the plot and 2. Properly hate. This story deserve way less than a 8.5 but honestly? It’s not even the worse thing I’ve read it was just very badly written
Last update, I still feel like Liam and Derrick could be a good match
I appreciate you for this
HAHA LMAO CUCK CHAIR. i hate it when people are funnier than me
I’m a pervert and love the sex but this is completely correct. NOX AND DERRICK FOREVER!!!!!! The “brotherly love” shit is so out of place. It would make more sense if they were like rivaling families or something. Either way my dick hard so it’s not really my place but DUDE
You don't know how MUCH I want that! They got that chemistry
Hey you gotta be educated in everything, even trash
I called him derrcuck in my head the whole time I was reading this
Hey if dick hard dick hard I’m not one to judge but I feel like my cock enjoys good plot unfortunately. It’s so picky
The little comments, the glances, it could work really
I powered through this story by sheer force of will and ego. Quite frankly, I tweaked reading this. The story is bad, the characters are badly written and genuinely I can’t even enjoy the smut because of that. I spent my time reading this half laughing (because of how ridiculous and incoherent this story is) and crying (because I was already too far to give up).
The random exposition is awful and he story moves way too quickly while ignoring flagrant weird shit.
Also why does Nox seem to only have a personality when he’s with Derrick? Actually I take it back, it feels like he’s 3 different characters with all 3.
In my humble opinion, Derrick is the only one he truly loves without the whole pheromone bs. Unfortunately Derrick is a cuck. He loves his cuck chair (not really but damn you had 8 years to act on your feelings brother). Even then, Derrick is still the best option (even thought we know Nox is gonna end up with all 3).
Liam is… kinda strange? The story happens in such a short amount of time that it’s really weird. I mean he was the only one who recognized their situation was bizarre but even that’s just ignored later and place on idk jealousy?
Furthermore, wtf is the Yuri thing? I already don’t like the brother storyline in general but this one was just stupid. “They got bonded when they were kids” how tf did that happen if Nox was abusing him? Then that’s swept under the rug after one convo and genuinely stop calling him brother WHILE YOU’RE INSIDE HIM (but that might be a translation thing cause he does call him hyung later on).
I hate most characters except Derrick and his family ngl. Well hate is too much of a strong word, I think it’s fucking stupid.
In conclusion, wtf did I just read