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Huh, loved some parts of this story, but not all of them. The pacing was sometimes all ove...

Letharia August 22, 2026 1:45 pm

Huh, loved some parts of this story, but not all of them. The pacing was sometimes all over the place, as was the plot. The two main characters were endearing, I'll give you that, but I feel like the end was rushed, and that so many characters had much more potential to be further expended. Also why the heck the end was cut short like that with all the "putting him on the throne" and "harder to make babies" and potential politics plots getting thrown out the windows ?! That was one of the most interesting potential plot of the story, with Haru actually suggesting that he could become a great King and that they could change the Rabbit Kingdom from the inside and what not. Kinda disappointed. :(

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