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2. As for the author... well, it feels like there's a lack of connection with the characters and the work itself. I don't mean to bash it, but when creating a story, the creator should be the first to truly understand the narrative and the plot—only then does it reach the readers.
I'm not sure what else to say. If you have any opinions or criticisms for me? Bring it on—I'm open to anything!
Ugh! I just can't. From the very beginning, I had a feeling this manhwa would have a "heavy" plot. I have a few thoughts on this:
1. This *uke* (bottom character) doesn't really make sense. What exactly is his trauma? Who is actually at fault? And who is he targeting for revenge? Honestly, it just feels a bit immature to me.