I began reading this believing I’d never seen it before but as I went along I remembered dropping it years ago. But I couldn’t remember why. Until chapter 10.
The perv storyline truly is an unnecessary subplot! Because what even is the poiiiiint!? If that character is meant to fit the role of the third in a love triangle, that’s not what it feels or looks like. Before chapter 10 there is ONE scene of all of them together, ONE scene of ML being jealous and mildly possessive and that’s it. Everything else from there is the perv taking advantage of cutie patootie (I’ve already forgotten all their names and no I don’t want to remember them). I’m here to read about a monogamous love story! But NO, the author wanted to take a detour and explore a USELESS and frankly uncomfortable storyline! I skimmed and scrolled those chapters thinking, “nahhh pervy isn’t gonna go there. Plot armor should kick in any moment now and ML will be there soon to save cutie patootie…. wow it’s still going… wow, it’s not stopping…. WHY ISNT IT STOPPING?”. Bro’s not even the main character! Why does he have more screen time than the supposed ML?!?! I could say so much more but truly not worth my time. Ugh, sucks bc the art is so pretty. Hate when good art serves to tell a TERRIBLE story.
I began reading this believing I’d never seen it before but as I went along I remembered dropping it years ago. But I couldn’t remember why. Until chapter 10.
The perv storyline truly is an unnecessary subplot! Because what even is the poiiiiint!? If that character is meant to fit the role of the third in a love triangle, that’s not what it feels or looks like. Before chapter 10 there is ONE scene of all of them together, ONE scene of ML being jealous and mildly possessive and that’s it. Everything else from there is the perv taking advantage of cutie patootie (I’ve already forgotten all their names and no I don’t want to remember them). I’m here to read about a monogamous love story! But NO, the author wanted to take a detour and explore a USELESS and frankly uncomfortable storyline! I skimmed and scrolled those chapters thinking, “nahhh pervy isn’t gonna go there. Plot armor should kick in any moment now and ML will be there soon to save cutie patootie…. wow it’s still going… wow, it’s not stopping…. WHY ISNT IT STOPPING?”. Bro’s not even the main character! Why does he have more screen time than the supposed ML?!?! I could say so much more but truly not worth my time. Ugh, sucks bc the art is so pretty. Hate when good art serves to tell a TERRIBLE story.