It's stupid af. The best and worst part are the dressing downs in chapter 18-20 where they really psychoanalyze each other. It calls out bad behaviour and it's pretty good. The melodramatics around it aren't good enough to support it. If an ally prince came to my kingdom and stated treating my citizen like Adrian did, he'd have been tossed out and the king given a stern warning to watch his son. Nana isn't a well written character and she's pretty one-note. She could have been handled better to make her an ally rather than her jumping to extremes, but that's assuming the author wasn't trying to wrap things up ASAP.
Prince Adrian is the worst party here. He's a paranoid loser who can't let things go. Nana will accept those parts of him because she also struggles with the same flaws, and that's kinda wholesome of her, but she also jumped to murder instead of probing for information so they're both kinda dumb. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
MC isn't too awful. She's a typical FL who was trained in magic and supposedly swordsmanship but it never comes up! She gets attacked a few times and nada. We can argue she was surprised and didn't have time, she's a noble lady and probably hasn't used it in combat, Sara or some random was there and could have gotten caught in it yada yada. I don't need FL to be a badass, punching, high kick martial queen, but maybe at least a passing "oh no, I can't damage the buildings!" Or a nice "Freeze is a fun debuff to have!" Give us SOMETHING. Or don't bother mentioning it at all if it's not going to be relevant. This story focuses on her healing magic anyway. She's very forgiving, but I'll give her some brownie points on realizing she and Nana's roles very much could have been reversed. It's a nice moment that the rest of the story doesn't hold up. She's a typical "care about everyone saint type" and coolio for her. Some people are just like that.
Other than being bad it's biggest fault is being boring. Stuff happens but the only praise I can muster is that the plot sure doesn't waste any time. It gets to the point it wants, hits the point, and keeps going. I'll be shocked if this doesn't have maybe 30-33 chapters in total before it ends.
It's stupid af. The best and worst part are the dressing downs in chapter 18-20 where they really psychoanalyze each other. It calls out bad behaviour and it's pretty good. The melodramatics around it aren't good enough to support it. If an ally prince came to my kingdom and stated treating my citizen like Adrian did, he'd have been tossed out and the king given a stern warning to watch his son. Nana isn't a well written character and she's pretty one-note. She could have been handled better to make her an ally rather than her jumping to extremes, but that's assuming the author wasn't trying to wrap things up ASAP.
Prince Adrian is the worst party here. He's a paranoid loser who can't let things go. Nana will accept those parts of him because she also struggles with the same flaws, and that's kinda wholesome of her, but she also jumped to murder instead of probing for information so they're both kinda dumb. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
MC isn't too awful. She's a typical FL who was trained in magic and supposedly swordsmanship but it never comes up! She gets attacked a few times and nada. We can argue she was surprised and didn't have time, she's a noble lady and probably hasn't used it in combat, Sara or some random was there and could have gotten caught in it yada yada. I don't need FL to be a badass, punching, high kick martial queen, but maybe at least a passing "oh no, I can't damage the buildings!" Or a nice "Freeze is a fun debuff to have!" Give us SOMETHING. Or don't bother mentioning it at all if it's not going to be relevant. This story focuses on her healing magic anyway.
She's very forgiving, but I'll give her some brownie points on realizing she and Nana's roles very much could have been reversed. It's a nice moment that the rest of the story doesn't hold up. She's a typical "care about everyone saint type" and coolio for her. Some people are just like that.
Other than being bad it's biggest fault is being boring. Stuff happens but the only praise I can muster is that the plot sure doesn't waste any time. It gets to the point it wants, hits the point, and keeps going. I'll be shocked if this doesn't have maybe 30-33 chapters in total before it ends.