welcome to my rant. so from the title of the novel they did show us the fl's demure husband, him being all lovely dovey and shit. but some plot holes just leave me wondering, like if he was planning to fool her why sign their marriage certificates with his real name? how didn't she notice for a whole year until their anniversary? and then we go to the hidden compartment which conviniently had her info hidden. honestly if i was planning a fake marriage murder i wouldn't keep evidence in the house but thats just me. so why is it after he realised his plan wasn't working out for killing her on their anniversary why don't we see any attempts? all she does is get anxious all the time, which the ml should have noticed. if my partner started distancing themselves i'd notice if they were being that obvious. plus this is someone who has been watching the fl their entire time together and you mean when she just found out who he is now she can start scheeming behind his back and he hasn't even nearly caught her once? fine we can say ginger has been helping but how? how's a new hire blocking info from all the people he's had on her since day one? like the whole premise for the story is quite nice but i can't really feel the characters emotions or personality other than their broadly defined behaviours. don't get me wrong her whole escape plan is good it's just the surrounding context and story just isn't doing it for me. i'll let it marinate a bit more and see how it plays out for her running away and what happens after that, but as for now these are my thoughts. thank you for listening to my ted talk
welcome to my rant.
so from the title of the novel they did show us the fl's demure husband, him being all lovely dovey and shit. but some plot holes just leave me wondering, like if he was planning to fool her why sign their marriage certificates with his real name? how didn't she notice for a whole year until their anniversary? and then we go to the hidden compartment which conviniently had her info hidden. honestly if i was planning a fake marriage murder i wouldn't keep evidence in the house but thats just me. so why is it after he realised his plan wasn't working out for killing her on their anniversary why don't we see any attempts? all she does is get anxious all the time, which the ml should have noticed. if my partner started distancing themselves i'd notice if they were being that obvious. plus this is someone who has been watching the fl their entire time together and you mean when she just found out who he is now she can start scheeming behind his back and he hasn't even nearly caught her once? fine we can say ginger has been helping but how? how's a new hire blocking info from all the people he's had on her since day one? like the whole premise for the story is quite nice but i can't really feel the characters emotions or personality other than their broadly defined behaviours. don't get me wrong her whole escape plan is good it's just the surrounding context and story just isn't doing it for me. i'll let it marinate a bit more and see how it plays out for her running away and what happens after that, but as for now these are my thoughts.
thank you for listening to my ted talk