I mean, I guess the story is pretty decent. I didn't particularly like the way the story handled the Blondie. It didn't feel like he suffered enough for the way he acted and when he did suffer, and it was good, mind you, he kinda just reverted back to how he acted afterwards, even though he said and affirmed that he'll be better. Sure, he could've acted like that after putting in the effort but the problem was that he didn't. There wasn't enough effort for that forgiveness yet, even though it was close. He earned his forgiveness too easily and reverted back to how the cocky attitude he had before. Brownie head also has his own issues. Communication is a foreign language to him and my guy BARELY talks things out before coming to his own conclusions. It's a bit of a messy story overall...but, The last few chapters and especially the proposal moment was very sweet and cute. I really liked that and wished we got to see more of that kind of energy from Blondie the first time he wanted to change and become better rather than now. That's my overall personal thoughts on the story.
I mean, I guess the story is pretty decent. I didn't particularly like the way the story handled the Blondie. It didn't feel like he suffered enough for the way he acted and when he did suffer, and it was good, mind you, he kinda just reverted back to how he acted afterwards, even though he said and affirmed that he'll be better. Sure, he could've acted like that after putting in the effort but the problem was that he didn't. There wasn't enough effort for that forgiveness yet, even though it was close. He earned his forgiveness too easily and reverted back to how the cocky attitude he had before. Brownie head also has his own issues. Communication is a foreign language to him and my guy BARELY talks things out before coming to his own conclusions. It's a bit of a messy story overall...but, The last few chapters and especially the proposal moment was very sweet and cute. I really liked that and wished we got to see more of that kind of energy from Blondie the first time he wanted to change and become better rather than now. That's my overall personal thoughts on the story.