This suffers from some serious pacing issues, and because of this the scenes lack emotional impact. I think to begin with, this story doesn’t have much depth, just tries to keep you entertained with its fast pacing enough to make you keep reading.
This suffers from some serious pacing issues, and because of this the scenes lack emotional impact. I think to begin with, this story doesn’t have much depth, just tries to keep you entertained with its fast pacing enough to make you keep reading.