idk if this is just me but there is something about this story that feels like it’s soulless i can’t explain why. is it the progression and pacing? are the chapters too short? or is it the fact that it feels like the story is developing too fast yet feels like no development at all for some reasons?
idk if this is just me but there is something about this story that feels like it’s soulless i can’t explain why. is it the progression and pacing? are the chapters too short? or is it the fact that it feels like the story is developing too fast yet feels like no development at all for some reasons?