Gosh... this was... bad??? but in like a fast food kinda bad?
Like, I kept hoping for the burger on the picture, but the burger that was served was not as nice, but also, fine enough that I did not stop eating?
So I guess, not that bad?
Idk, I just feel like this story had so much potential, and so many good ideas (too many), but because they are all so rushed, they don't land properly.
Like:
1. The manwha telling us Iri is a killer that murders pregnant omega was just so unbelivable that I burst out laughting. I guessed he was a secret agent right away.
2. The widow is too shallow of a character, and him trying to kill chick was a plot point that was too contrived and not really interesting? Also at the end, he changes his mind way too fast.
3. Iri being an agent is like... too stupid. It's jsut very inconsistent with the character. Like, to go back to the Widow, you would think he would trust Iri's judgement faster when Iri says the Chick is innocent... also, if he knew, what was all that talk about 'gettin Iri out?'. If it was a tactic to hide Iri's identity, that should be made clear to the reader at some point.
4. Anything the warden did left me puzzled. Like what?
5. Anything the lawyer did ALSO left me puzzled. EVEN more When you know the final twist.
6. Like many manwha every rape scene (And boy, there is many) is said to be consensual, even when consent is dubious AT BEST. Kinda tired of that trope. At this point I just accept it.
7. Chick plot point of hating all alpha is just empty.
8. 2089 was the most miss-managed character. Him being a spy made no sense. Also, he knew way too much, way too fast, that led to too many reveals ALL the TIME. and that made no sense. Also, he was not consistant in his goals, so the reveal was kinda dumb at the end.
HOWEVER, I will give it to this mahwa. It was very entertaining, and if I suspend my disbelief, I can SEE the story they were trying to write.
Gosh... this was... bad??? but in like a fast food kinda bad?
Like, I kept hoping for the burger on the picture, but the burger that was served was not as nice, but also, fine enough that I did not stop eating?
So I guess, not that bad?
Idk, I just feel like this story had so much potential, and so many good ideas (too many), but because they are all so rushed, they don't land properly.
Like:
1. The manwha telling us Iri is a killer that murders pregnant omega was just so unbelivable that I burst out laughting. I guessed he was a secret agent right away.
2. The widow is too shallow of a character, and him trying to kill chick was a plot point that was too contrived and not really interesting? Also at the end, he changes his mind way too fast.
3. Iri being an agent is like... too stupid. It's jsut very inconsistent with the character. Like, to go back to the Widow, you would think he would trust Iri's judgement faster when Iri says the Chick is innocent... also, if he knew, what was all that talk about 'gettin Iri out?'. If it was a tactic to hide Iri's identity, that should be made clear to the reader at some point.
4. Anything the warden did left me puzzled. Like what?
5. Anything the lawyer did ALSO left me puzzled. EVEN more When you know the final twist.
6. Like many manwha every rape scene (And boy, there is many) is said to be consensual, even when consent is dubious AT BEST. Kinda tired of that trope. At this point I just accept it.
7. Chick plot point of hating all alpha is just empty.
8. 2089 was the most miss-managed character. Him being a spy made no sense. Also, he knew way too much, way too fast, that led to too many reveals ALL the TIME. and that made no sense. Also, he was not consistant in his goals, so the reveal was kinda dumb at the end.
HOWEVER, I will give it to this mahwa. It was very entertaining, and if I suspend my disbelief, I can SEE the story they were trying to write.