I understand this is supossed to be a short story thus they had to fasten the plot but the question here is... is there even a plot? What u mean they met 7 years ago, went out ONE time and texted for like 4 days but they are IN LOVE with eachother and they been longing for eachother ?!?! Then it got worse when Yoosung said his dream become second after falling in love with the man he knew for like TWO WEEKS, and mind you they didn't talk that much cause they were from diffent grades. IT MAKES ZERO FREAKIN SENSE Don't get me wrong, I'm a same gender lover myself and I can understand how deep and strong this relationships feel, but this is just bullshit, I can think in many better ways to develop the plot than this !!!
I understand this is supossed to be a short story thus they had to fasten the plot but the question here is... is there even a plot?
What u mean they met 7 years ago, went out ONE time and texted for like 4 days but they are IN LOVE with eachother and they been longing for eachother ?!?! Then it got worse when Yoosung said his dream become second after falling in love with the man he knew for like TWO WEEKS, and mind you they didn't talk that much cause they were from diffent grades. IT MAKES ZERO FREAKIN SENSE
Don't get me wrong, I'm a same gender lover myself and I can understand how deep and strong this relationships feel, but this is just bullshit, I can think in many better ways to develop the plot than this !!!