The author needs to spend more time on the uke’s mental health and how being in a toxic relationship is wearing him down, instead of leaning on sex and rape scenes to carry the story. It should also start filling in his backstory now, who is this new guy? Why is the uke afraid of him? Where do all his scars come from, and what caused them?
The author clearly doesn’t know how to write a mentally ill character convincingly. There needs to be real depth on how an unhealthy obsession and relationship can wear someone down, especially someone already unstable. So far all we’ve gotten is that he’s obsessively attached to the seme, with no real exploration of why. On top of that, the uke is constantly degraded.
Also, from what I can tell, the uke wasn’t a virgin before the seme, so is this new guy an ex? Guess we’ll see.
The author needs to spend more time on the uke’s mental health and how being in a toxic relationship is wearing him down, instead of leaning on sex and rape scenes to carry the story. It should also start filling in his backstory now, who is this new guy? Why is the uke afraid of him? Where do all his scars come from, and what caused them?
The author clearly doesn’t know how to write a mentally ill character convincingly. There needs to be real depth on how an unhealthy obsession and relationship can wear someone down, especially someone already unstable. So far all we’ve gotten is that he’s obsessively attached to the seme, with no real exploration of why. On top of that, the uke is constantly degraded.
Also, from what I can tell, the uke wasn’t a virgin before the seme, so is this new guy an ex? Guess we’ll see.