3 chapters in and I couldn’t understand the plot. The flow’s weird as hell everything happened as if they were in a different timeline. Maybe its trying to be mysterious but it just doesn’t work. The ML is making me cringe so HARD I had flashbacks from my 12yo self who would imagine a character like him. The dialogue, expressions, and demeanor feel like they were written by 12yo or like he’s some kind of an alpha mafia boss. The FL’s also bland, they’re trying to make her look weak and all which was understandable for the trope but it feels like she’s always giving the same blank and worried expressions all the time. Not worth my time at all, skip!
3 chapters in and I couldn’t understand the plot. The flow’s weird as hell everything happened as if they were in a different timeline. Maybe its trying to be mysterious but it just doesn’t work. The ML is making me cringe so HARD I had flashbacks from my 12yo self who would imagine a character like him. The dialogue, expressions, and demeanor feel like they were written by 12yo or like he’s some kind of an alpha mafia boss. The FL’s also bland, they’re trying to make her look weak and all which was understandable for the trope but it feels like she’s always giving the same blank and worried expressions all the time. Not worth my time at all, skip!