It was how they delivered the story that bothered me overall. Art is good, conversations were awkward or dull, FL really REALLY bothered me (her "revenge" was lame and attitude never changed into a stronger character, just seemed fake overall). The author just took a bunch of stuff together and forced it together. The story felt forced and did not flow well, even the characters were lacking, I didnt bond with them or have a favorite character. At least the art was average.
It was how they delivered the story that bothered me overall. Art is good, conversations were awkward or dull, FL really REALLY bothered me (her "revenge" was lame and attitude never changed into a stronger character, just seemed fake overall). The author just took a bunch of stuff together and forced it together. The story felt forced and did not flow well, even the characters were lacking, I didnt bond with them or have a favorite character. At least the art was average.