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It's a good story, but I don't think it was very well written. It would have been far bett...

It's a good story, but I don't think it was v...
tiggipi May 29, 2013 10:42 pm

It's a good story, but I don't think it was very well written. It would have been far better if it was longer, but as it is, it feels extremely rushed and incomplete. I couldn't get into it, everything happened so ridiculously fast.

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    Anonymous April 20, 2015 8:46 am

    agree

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