I feel like there's too much going on, the plot is kinda messy and emotional scene doesn't really feels that emotional *well obviously because this is comedy?. But like, I feel the author wanted to make a lot of different incidents and stuffs, but it feels forced. For example jumping into emotional scene so suddenly, or when someone is really miserable it didn't really feels like it because of the drawing style is too cute. I said this not because I hate this manhua, I respect the artist because it took a lot of effort for making this manhua. I just want to point something that can be improved, it's good but the author kinda need a lil bit help from a Webtoon editor.
I feel like there's too much going on, the plot is kinda messy and emotional scene doesn't really feels that emotional *well obviously because this is comedy?. But like, I feel the author wanted to make a lot of different incidents and stuffs, but it feels forced. For example jumping into emotional scene so suddenly, or when someone is really miserable it didn't really feels like it because of the drawing style is too cute. I said this not because I hate this manhua, I respect the artist because it took a lot of effort for making this manhua. I just want to point something that can be improved, it's good but the author kinda need a lil bit help from a Webtoon editor.